in the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
It is true that people in
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industrialised
nations can
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expect
to
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
longer

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than
ever
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before
.
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Although
there will
undoubtedly
be
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some
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negative


consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these

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potential
problems.

As people
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live
longer and the populations of
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developed countries
grow older, several related problems can
be anticipated
. The main issue is that there will
obviously
be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will
therefore
receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population.
In other words
, an
Possible spelling mistake. 'ageing' is British English.aging
ageing
population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults.
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Further
pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will
increasingly
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have to
look after their elderly relatives.

There are several actions that governments could take to solve the

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problems
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described
above.
Firstly
, a simple solution would be to increase

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the
retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays,

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people
of this age tend to be healthy
This words can be replaced with:sufficient
enough
to continue a productive

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working
life. A second measure would be for governments to
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encourage


immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay

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taxes
.
Finally
, money from national budgets will need to
be taken
from

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other
areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.

In conclusion
, various measures can
be taken
to tackle the problems that

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are
certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.
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