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with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
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some
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with :retain
keep
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses
(unless they are closely connected and short).discussion, and
discussion
and
On the one hand, it is apparent that there are a number of feasible reasons for this
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced
with :modifyalter
change
consequently
they expand
their knowledge about the local public such as language, food and consequently
on. They also
have local neighbors and
a new decent job at the local thanks to the communication with others. Therefore
, over a long time,
they have tended to building new habits, which are well-suit for their life, creating a new way of
life. This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced
with :exclusively
Only
On the other hand, thanks to keeping traditional culture, which is a national identity with a person, have been a number of beneficial.
First
, For economic perspective,
when immigration create their This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced
with :possess
own
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, the Chinese This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced
with :approacharrive
come
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with :admireadore
love
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced
with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
In
addition
to living the similar roof people are a great vital to new immigration. They are
likely to receive the support of others in that community leading to easier overcoming the
restriction of the stranger environment.In conclusion
, in the era of
globalization, when the immigration has gained the popularity, both of views has their benefits. In
my opinion, people, moving on other place should build a tiny community and store their traditional
value culture.