highly
debatable whether working as an employee
under any company or choosing to open their work is a fruitful approach. Although being
self-employed gives flexibility, I believe working for an institution is a better method as it
provides a sense of financial security.On the one hand, running
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financially
secure as they received regular salaries while sitting at home. Secondly
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a reputed company receives the benefit of getting better jobs in the future. For instance
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In conclusion
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